End of the art class

 This road is very steep and has a hairpin curve to enable it to reach the park.

At the end of each of my art classes, we all display the work we have done during class, and anything we have done at home and brought to class, The teacher than goes through the pictures one at a  time giving suggestions and critiquing the pictures. His comments are designed to be useful to the student and so far I think they have been very useful. His comments about mine have got me thinking about how to improve my technique.